Vi went out and left Bonnie in charge of Victor and me. I would not have left Bonnie in charge of a pet rock. If my mother had said to me, “Chicken, I’m going out. Do you think Bonnie would make a good babysitter?”, I would have replied, “Hell no, woman, are you mad?” but she never asked me. She just ordered us a pizza and left.
I wanted to play Monopoly but Bonnie and Victor wanted to watch the 8:00 p.m. movie. Did you ever see the “Boston Strangler”? I did. I don’t remember it, of course, because I’ve suppressed it. Occasionally one of the other personalities I developed that evening will bring it up.
About three quarters of the way through the movie, when victims were still piling up, the papers were having a field day, and the police chief was looking foolish (or so I imagine) Bonnie and Victor got hungry. They asked me if I wanted ice cream. I allowed as how I could probably choke down some ice cream.
“Wouldn’t you know it”, Victor said, “We’re all out. One of us will have to walk to the store.”
I was too young to be out on the streets alone so late at night, and Bonnie was the babysitter, me being the baby in question, so it only seemed logical that Victor, a bona fide teenager, should go.
Logic not being the available muse that evening, we drew straws. I drew the shortest one. I waited a couple of seconds for someone to come to her bloody senses, but Bonnie handed me a fiver and turned back to the movie. “Get me a Pepsi, too, k?”
The closest store was at the end of our block. It was where the bad boys hung out at night, smoking cigarettes, selling joints and harassing women. I walked fast down the sidewalk, sticking to the shadows. When I got to the store I put my head down and scurried past the hooligans, trying not to draw attention. Inside I gathered our ice cream, the Pepsi and a bag of barbecue chips for my trouble. I paid and headed back home, my heart pounding. I was almost there. Just five houses to go. Now four. Sweet Jesus, I was going to make it.
I sensed movement to my left. I looked over and caught a glimpse of shadow moving fast between the last two houses. I started to run but before I could get into full stride, the Portland Strangler jumped out of the shadows. He ran at me, screaming, “Where’s my ice cream!!!!!”
And that’s when Mary Catherine was born. Mary Catherine is a young girl who talks with a cute lisp and carries her stuffed donkey everywhere she goes. No one would ever hurt Mary Catherine or send her to a store alone at night. If they tried she would make them burst into flames with her eyes.
Bonnie sat on the back steps of our house laughing her ass off. “Poor Bonnie”, thought Mary Catherine. “Her lookth cold.”
Chicken out
Your mom…never mind, I was just gonna ask a question. You must have learned so much from her. Anyway. Portland, Oregon?
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Hi Kerry, Portland, Maine. Don't worry. Mary is not real. I made her up. Really.
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Oh and what was the question?
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Hilarious. You have such a flair for storytelling.
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Hi Hilary, thanks:-)
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Is it normal that I heard weird shrieking violin music at the end there?
Great story! And great picture. Which came first, do you mind telling us?
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Oh. My. Goodness. I just snorted a wasabi pea into my nostril. Genius you are. Pure genius.
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ALOHA from Honolulu
Comfort Spiral
=^..^= ❤
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Jenny-i heard it too! The story came first. Then I googled “scary girl” and got very lucky.
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Shelly, I'm sorry about the wasabi. That sounds painful. Quite a compliment to me, however, so thanks for that.
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Aloha to you, Cloudia
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It fits perfectly. But it would be nothing – NOTHING – without the story 🙂
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The bad boys outside the corner store sound like my 1 p.m. class when they loiter outside the classroom. I might need to develop a few alternate personalities to get through this semester with them.
At any rate, huge guffaw for this all around, especially: “…once in awhile one of the other personalities I developed that evening will bring it up.”
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You're tho funny!! I don't know if that is based on any part of real story but if Bonnie really existed….she definitely wasn't babysitting material.
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Jocelyn…I know those boys. Look close enough and you'll see the ghost of high school past lurking about. That would be me.. Poor, ill-advised, had to do it my way me:-) And thanks-that was one of my favorite lines. I'm happy that you picked up on it.
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Bonnie did exist and I'm feeling a little badly because she was actually a very nice person, but she really did let me walk to the store and she really did not stop my brother from scaring the crap out of me so think of this as the Chicken's revenge. It all happened just as reported except for Mary Catherine. I think.
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Aw Jenny-thanks so much. I think the story and the picture kind of complete each other. “You had me at fire”. That's what I picture them saying to each other.
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This is hysterical, and I loved how you built the tension with these lines: I paid and headed back home, my heart pounding. I was almost there. Just five houses to go. Now four. Sweet Jesus, I was going to make it.
I actually had a stuffed donkey. I slept with its neck over my neck every night so if vampires came they would bite the donkey's neck and not mine. 🙂 And now I want some ice cream.
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Me too, Jayne, I had a stuffed donkey and I want ice cream. Let's go together! Thanks.
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As soon as the straws came out it was like someone turned the volume to 11. Loved this er I mean lovthd this!
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Magnificent writer. This is my first time here, so you've probably heard that a million times, and I didn't know it. Let me be number Million and One.
Congratulations on Post of the Week.
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Hi DBS, thank you, that is great input. It's interesting that I revised up to that point many times, but not much after. I liked the way it came out pretty much the first time around. I wonder what would crank it up from the beginning-any suggestions?
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Hi Jackie, I'm a chicken-we have big egos. It's hard to imagine hearing I'm magnificent too many times. Thank you very much and congrats on your POTW, as well.
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LOL.
I read “The Exorcist” at 12 — who was watching me, dagnabbit?! — and not only did we have a massive thunderstorm that night but it was the first night our dog had an epileptic seizure… Like you, I've suppressed a lot of that evening…
Pearl
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Omg, Pearl, you crazy kid. I didn't even watch the movie until I was well into my forties. I would never read the book as my imagination is so much more frightening than anything Hollywood can dream up I hope.
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Good one, Chicken. The photo really was a stroke of serendipitous genius. 🙂 GG
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Thanks GG. I think Mary Catherine manifested that picture. She's a powerful little squirt.
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I remember my Mom would let me watch the Twilight Zone when I was like five years old. Years later I asked her what the hell she thinking? Great story Chicken!
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Meg!!! How have you been? Thanks for visiting. I am comin' over
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Hey! Glad to see you back on the blogosphere. I really miss your updates when you're gone.
Doing well, the hubby just got back from deployment so all is good again. I eased into the vegan thing the best way I knew how, by going vegetarian first. Did that for about a month before getting serious. I don't plan to be a vegan for life; this is more of an experiment/reset than anything.
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Hey there, Ashes, I'm glad to hear your husband is back home safe and sound. That's great! I'll be interested to hear how the vegan lifestyle works out-I mean, I wonder if it is soft of like exercising and at some point you have this break through moment and you are in the zone. The vegan zone. And what does that feel like?
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Chickie, I still think this is a great story and I still heard violins shrieking! (see 2014 comment!)
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Thanks:-) Funny-I read this one today also. I had to add the photo back in because it disappeared when I moved from Blogger. Did I publish it again or something? How did you end up reading it?
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Yep, it showed up in the feed of new posts on Blogger!
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Ohhh-I knew it was too much of a coincidence. It must be because I updated it. Well, that kind stinks if you can’t go back and update new stuff without re-publishing. What about all the commas I need to correct?
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Yes, I would’ve thought that “update” would just fix it too. I wonder if you could fix or change stuff (and keep the original publish date) by using “edit” and then “save” and “close”. Good to know this anyway. I’m not sure if you saw my post recently about using the “enter” button on the keyboard after typing in the title line of a post in Blogger – it publishes the darn post. But since you don’t use Blogger now, you don’t have to worry about that!
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I tried that today=there’s no save button. I’m gonna have to google it:-)
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